Friday, April 20, 2012

MLA Style: The Cheat Sheet


MLA


In your paper, whenever you quote or paraphrase another source, you must always indicate:

1.                  The AUTHOR
2.                  The PAGE NUMBER from where the quote or information was taken

Examples of quoting another source:

Smith explains, “The hierarchy of beauty as a mirror to the hierarchy of status in the first half of the novel may seem nonsensical to the modern reader, although perhaps it shouldn’t” (74).  This is an example of a SIGNAL PHRASE because in the sentence the author is listed.

It is noted that “hierarchy of beauty as a mirror to the hierarchy of status in the first half of the novel may seem nonsensical to the modern reader” (Smith 74).  This is an example of where the author and page number are indicated at the end in parentheses.

NOTICE THAT IN BOTH INSTANCES THE PERIOD COMES AFTER THE PAGE NUMBER PARENTHETICAL.

Example of paraphrasing another source (not quoting):

Beauty often mirrors hierarchy of status in the novel (Wright 74). 

-- AGAIN, NOTICE THAT THE PERIOD COMES AFTER THE PAGE NUMBER PARENTHETICAL.


If it is a long quotation, you need to set off quote by indenting (block quotes).  Example:

            Lookism, George Wright argues, has not gone away:

The assumed correlation between inner and outer beauty is consistently evident in children’s Disney animation, televised Miss America Pageants, and big budget Hollywood films. One could argue that these modern-day examples are vestiges of a bygone fairytale era closer to Aphra Behn’s literary world. In any event, the narrator establishes to the readers that certain foreign people … are special examples of their race and this specialness is most evident in their very appearance.  (3-4)

NOTICE that with indented block quotes (long quotations), the period comes before the page number in parentheses.  This is different from the other examples.


You must also have a Works Cited page where you list your sources.  See links below for explanations of setting one up.




Sunday, April 15, 2012

Commas: The Basics


This is not a complete list.  The following situations are the five most common reasons for using commas.  Learn them.

  1. Use a comma between two clauses (subject + verb) joined by the following conjunctions:
and
but
or
nor
for (which means the same as “because” and “since”)
so
yet

Notice how there is a clause on either side of the conjunction.  Examples:

The boy with ADHD was watching television, and he was playing games on his computer.

I would go with you to rent the DVD at Redbox, but I already saw it twice in the theaters.

Do not disobey me, or you will see what happens when people don’t follow orders.

The snobby woman has never considered dating a nerd, nor has she ever considered dating anyone without a car. 

Nobody was listening to the teacher, for everybody was too busy talking about who won on “The Voice” last night.

We have all been through this over and over again, so please don’t ask any more questions about the procedure.

She is tweeting all the time, yet somehow she still manages to hear everything the teacher is saying.


  1. Use a comma after introductory elements
The following introductory adverb clauses are followed by a comma when they start a clause at the beginning of a sentence.  This is not a complete list, but you get the idea.

AFTER:  After he took out the trash, he went into the house and did the dishes.
ALTHOUGH:  Although she has a nice complexion, her hair is always tangled.
AS FAR AS:  As far as I know, there are no bears in that forest.
AS LONG AS:  As long as you keep studying, your grades will improve.
AS SOON AS:  As soon as the police officer left, the robbers went back to the bank to steal from the vault.
BECAUSE:  Because you never forget to study, you continue to receive good grades.
BEFORE:  Before he sent the e-mail, he proofread it and added a few more sentences.
IF:  If you want to become a clown at the circus, you have to go to Clown College.
NO MATTTER HOW:  No matter how much he tries, he cannot seem to master the art of singing like Michael Jackson.
NOW THAT:  Now that I took the test, I feel relieved that it’s all over.
ONCE:  Once she decided to become a nicer person, everybody noticed.
PROVIDED:  Provided you eat your vegetables, you can have dessert.
SINCE:  Since he is always late, we’ve come to expect it.
UNLESS:  Unless it rains tomorrow, the party will be held outdoors.
WHEN:  When the bomb was dropped on Nagasaki, many people instantly died.
WHENEVER:  Whenever you sneeze, please remember to use a Kleenex.
WHEREVER:  Wherever he goes, people follow.
WHETHER OR NOT:  Whether or not you decide to audition, remember to use deodorant in the morning.
WHILE:  While the movie was playing, I couldn’t help worrying if I turned off all the lights in the house before I left for the theater.


  1. Use a comma after long introductory phrases.  Examples:
In times of confusion, doubt, and anxiety, yoga and meditation can be great coping strategies.

Within the totalitarian state of North Korean, many people are miserable and starving.


  1. After introductory transitional expressions, interjections, and introductory Yes/No.  Examples:

He was really stupid.  In fact, he usually forgot the answer after the teacher told it to him.

Well, I suppose it wouldn’t hurt to try.

Yes, you are accepted into this sorority on condition you pay your dues.


  1. Commas are used to separate items in a series.  Examples:

Her performance on “American Idol” was flawed, strange, and unprofessional.

Today at the flea market I bought a Prada handbag, a Kenneth Cole purse, a white dress, and a set of plates.

Some people are just mad, bad, and dangerous to know.

NOTE:  Notice that in the above three examples, there is a comma before the “and” that signals the last element.

Commas also separate series of adjectives before a noun.  Note that in these instances, there is no comma after the last adjective.  That is, do not put a comma after the last adjective before the noun.  Example:

Her flawed, strange, unprofessional performance gave her low marks from the judges on “American Idol.”

People often say he is a strange, difficult, irrational individual, but I think he is a genius.

Friday, March 30, 2012

APA STYLE: The Cheat Sheet


APA:


The APA style calls for three kinds of information to be included in in-text cited quotes. The author's last name and the work's date of publication and, in the case of quoted text, page number, must always appear.

IF THE QUOTE IS LESS THAN 40 WORDS:

Using a signal phrase where you list the author and year before the quotation, and put the page number at the end:

As Marshall Mathers (2008) revealed, “Guns and violence have been around me my whole life – in my family life, in my social life, everywhere” (p. 134). 

Notice that the period comes after the parenthentical.

Or you can quote without a signal phrase, and put the author, year, and page number at the end:

The hip hop artist noted, “Guns and violence have been around me my whole life – in my family life, in my social life, everywhere” (Mathers, 2008, p. 134). 

Again, notice that the period comes after the parenthetical.

IF THE QUOTE IS MORE THAN 40 WORDS:

If the quotation is more than 40 words, you need to do an indented block quotation.  Notice, that as always, the author, year, and page number are shown. 

            Marshall Mathers went on to explain his attitudes towards guns:

Anybody who has a gun will tell you that at first it makes them feel powerful.  I was infatuated.  Obviously I don’t feel that way now.  I’ve lost too many friends, family members, loved ones to gun violence.  I would much rather use my fists.  Kidding.  (Mathers, 2008, p. 134)

**  Notice that in the above example (indented quote), this time the period comes before the parenthetical.  The information in the parenthesis is not followed by a period.  This is different from the above examples about quotes less than 40 words.


SUMMARIZING AND PARAPHRASING:

For a summary or a paraphrase (not a direct quote) of another author’s writing:

According to Mathers (2008), guns hurt a lot of people and aren’t worth the powerful feeling they initially give a person (p. 134). 

-OR-

Guns hurt a lot of people and aren’t worth the powerful feeling they initially give a person (Mathers, 2008, p. 134). 

Again, notice that the period comes after the parenthetical.

In the two examples above, which say the same thing, note that the author and year and page number are indicated. 

** NOTE:  Your instructor may not require that you show page number for summary or paraphrasing, so check with him or her first.


At the end, you must always have a REFERENCES page.  In it, you will state your sources.  Example:

Mathers, M. (2008).  Eminem: the way I am.  New York: Penguin Group Inc.


Further sources on APA STYLE:



Monday, March 19, 2012

Titles of Works: Quotes or Italics?



Italicize for:
  • Books
  • Magazines
  • Newspapers
  • Pamphlets
  • Long musical works
  • Plays
  • Films
  • Radio and television programs
  • Long poems
  • Works of Art

Quotation Marks for:
  • Short stories
  • Essays
  • Short poems
  • Songs
  • Episodes of a radio or tv series
  • Articles in periodicals